Wednesday, November 23, 2011

day 24,i mean day 23, 33930

Deficit finally below 5k. good. Tomorrow should have him join the OSS. should hit training on Friday but... hard part over weekend. Istanbul. ugh. I am realizing that the reason chapter four was so hard to write was because I made it too darn long. Four should mostly be split between three and five. Move five back to four. Six to five. seven is two chapter's worth of materials - back in US; followed by OSS training and sending him to Istanbul. Paris is wonderful but it's really not four chapters! Not in this book at least. Also, needs more Normandy. Everything needs more Normandy. edited because i had marked this day 24. Not 23 [which is correct]

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